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Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 5
SUBMAIN
SUBBADGE

[xxArwenxx]
Will we ever learn?

Subtle blade's disaster
Cruel deceitful masters,
Nations at the mercy,
World inflicting cruelty,
Organized slaughters,
Murder by world orders,
Rich infecting poor,
Poison’s in the cure,
Nature hath no word,
Greed consumes the world,
People in a cold war,
No peace can ever be pure,
Bullets of voice and lead,
Innocent now lay dead,
People not concerned,
Will we ever learn?

[Lanie the cookie]
Forever

the prodding pain that's in my head
sounds like the sound of you heart
I can feel the pain everywhere
it seems like your everywhere always there never to leave you're haunting me forever
put together by faith thrown apart by love
why have we been put together on this world on this lonely earth
we now shall be together forever
to live together
to die together
to be forever together.

[Lycanthrope Heart]
Most Things

Most things have a beginning,
Like life,
It is begun by star drowned lovers,
Like hate,
They are engulfed by their feelings for each other,
Like water,
It flows unstoppable to it's un-timed end,
Like most things.

[shadow_angel]
Forever Midnight...

Midnight
And thoughts of you Are haunting me,
I see your face Etched in memory --
You are gone. Still, the midnight hour
Finds me wide awake, Living over once again
The time we had Together.
You were not By any means
My first love; Although you
Probably Will be my last.
I ache for your embrace, To see your smile
And your eyes -- How they twinkled
When you were Teasing me;
You knew All the buttons to push
To bring me to the Brink
Of self-destruction. So totally lost in you,
I was no equal. I will never
Stop loving you; As long as there is
Midnight; And memory
Brings you back.

[gaither babe]
Thoughts

New feelings come to me,
and now I finally see,
how cruel you can truly be.
Once you were here,
I began to fear,
everything that I hear.
All the words you've said,
Run around my empty head.
And now I wish you were dead.
Your hurt me and you lied...
And I died a little inside.
Even now I wonder why.
How could you?
Why would you?
Is it true?
Do you hate me?
I found the truth when I heard it from you.
But how can such a thing be true.
All of this is so new.
And now I hate you too.

[Monni]
Monni needs to put a title here

You said you loved me,
instead you lied.
You said you'd kiss me,
you never tried.
I gave you my heart,
you gave it away.
I thought you were different,
I thought you would stay.
I guess i was wrong,
you are not for me.
Obviously we're not meant to be.

You left me in the blue,
you promised forever true.
I guess that was a lie too.
You told me that you cared.
I thought you'd always be there,
what went wrong?
I will never know,
what went wrong between us.
It hurts me so bad,
to see you go.

You said you loved me,
instead you lied.
You said you'd kiss me,
you never tried.
You said you'd hug me,
instead you made me cry.

[jam]
suicide of the self

slit my wrist and let it bleed.
let it be the end of it in me.
its time for self-suicide.
this isn't normal suicide.
this isn't the death of the body.
its the death of me, and i ain't sorry.
we hit the peak,
and i kill what makes me weak.
what's left will still be me,
only now i will finally be free.

[iCh3wi]
The Pieces on the Floor

I look in on myself,
And all I see is sorrow.
Pieces of me lie on the floor,
And people are starring down at me,
From the photo's on the wall.

And still I wonder what went wrong?
Why did I choose this life?
Why not another?

For no one truly understands me.
They don't understand my style,
Feelings, or my idea of life.

And after all this,
The pieces are picked up,
And put back on the shelf.

Waiting,
Just waiting...
For another time to fall.

[Track Girl]
Fallen

Cursed upon the dawn of time.
A punishment for our crime.

Hatred swells from deep within.
Our hearts become cold and thin.

Day to day, from life to life.
Living off of pain and strife

Long ago was made a choice,
From the deceits of his voice.

To the heaven's we've brought shame.
And they to us have proclaimed,

That we the angels must fall.

[Roser]
Heaven's Cry

No matter what I do
No matter what I say
I know nothing can take away
Take away the pain
The pain you're feeling now
Anyway I hope somehow
That you've noticed the rain
The rain which set in today
I believe it's God's way
God's way to tell to you
You're not alone
Not alone in this
Heaven's crying too.

- written December 17th 2004

[_dilandau_]
The Emerald of My Eye

The woods are a magical realm.
The swaying of the enigmatic elms,
the peaceful motion is kind.
The forest has nothing else in mind.

The sweet song of the trees,
and the buzzing of the bees.
The forest guardian towers over all.
Many trees stand proud and tall.

Going around the thorny thistles,
The woeful wind whistles.
Sun, reveal your face!
Show us your warm embrace.

The silent symphonious rhythm,
your heart will tell you what's hidden.
Glorious, green grass envelopes the ground.
Wild, free, the plants go abound.

The beautiful emerald of my eye,
the forest, its deep depths without lies.
The rustling of the leaves,
Emanates what you perceive.

[D for David]
The Girl

She sits in the cold
Alone crying trembling
She can’t stop shaking
Jerking yelling wondering
She was cast to the side
Un-wanted un-loved un-worthy
She can never be happy
No matter what
She must always be alone
What is it?
A spell? A curse? Just her?
She will dream forever
Seeing what she could have been
Happy loved special not alone
Her boyfriend? He cheated on her and broke her heart
Her friends? What friends? The ones who lied and betrayed her?
Or the ones that deprived her of everything
She is me!

[the squeegee]
Memory.

My eyes have closed,
they've shut the world out.
Now I can't even see your face
I can only remember
how it felt
to reach out and touch your cheek
to revel in you sweet kiss,
its all just a memory
a moment from the past.
A time when I could breathe
and not be too frightened to speak.
All thats left
is your picture in my mind
nothing too special
just your mark in life.

[gaither babe]
Unexpected Responsibility

New things in life occur,
when in shock your stuck,
a new duty has arisen.
Never experience the joys of life,
when working until the end of night.
Unexpected responsibility's!
They're those little jobs that nag and pick at you until there's nothing left... Until your ready to slash your own throat. Until your ready to jump off the tallest building on earth. Until you are ready to go texas chainsaw massacre on every living thing on earth! Those are UNEXPECTED RESPONSIBILITIES!!!

[Vëaneron]
Special care...

Sitting here all alone,
I don't know why...
Thinking about my future and our love,
And maybe start to cry.

I think I love you too much,
But sometimes I can't find my heart.
I need you to talk with me,
Please don't put me apart.

Someone is taking you away from me,
I don't know what I'm gonna do.
I'll just have to wait and see.
Cause I have a special care for you...

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2005-08-10 [Adorable Ducky]: [VCNightGoddess] and [Arms Wide Open], you are only allowed one poem a month! All of yours will be deleted now for not obeying the rules. After you have read over them, you may submit again.

2005-08-10 [Adorable Ducky]: [Arms Wide Open], one a month!. And [elfflower1989], I am having to edit yours. Next time, the time won't be taken when it is easy for you to fix before submission. People, our rules have been made simple. Follow them please! Italics for titles, capitolize, one a month. PLEASE!

2005-08-12 [Arms Wide Open]: ok sorry

2005-09-19 [Skittles 254]: i dont know how to italics the title

2005-09-19 [Skittles 254]: never mind

2005-09-19 [Kaze]: <.<;; If I had more self esteem, I'd ask why mine was taken off. Fortunately, I don't. *beams*

2005-09-19 [Adorable Ducky]: I think it's because yours was chosen a few poems ago. We try to clean up so we don't pick them again.

2005-09-19 [Kaze]: o.O? ...that would of been the first time I'd ever submitted a poem at all..?

2005-09-20 [Adorable Ducky]: Go check our Featured Poem page. There's a link to it on the main page.

2005-09-20 [Kaze]: *blink blink* ... >.< makes me wish I knew it was there! D'oh! Well on the plus side, I got the formatting right. ^.^;

2005-12-12 [MysticLady]: yay just put my first poem

2005-12-15 [Allen Barrec]: [Lyon Armonial the healer], follow submission rules for format! Check the rules, fix your format.

2005-12-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: sorry...i'll fix it right now. ok, done. must....read....rules. !,!

2005-12-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: i like rule 7...twelve year old speak. that would annoy me too.

2005-12-16 [Allen Barrec]: lol, yes indeed. Thanks so much. ^_^

2005-12-17 [Noxxie]: so. . . . .. how will we know if our poem is used? O_o

2005-12-17 [Allen Barrec]: It'll be on Elfpack Daily Poem and on the Mainstreet. And if you miss it there, it'll be on our Featured Poems page.

2005-12-17 [Noxxie]: So you will never know unless you check there. . i thought you might get a message telling you or somthing. . . . . or maybe I'am just lazy :P

2005-12-17 [Allen Barrec]: Yeah, we're lazy, too. lol. But, you're on Mainstreet everytime you come onto EP, so... unless I'm the only one who goes there first? : P

2005-12-17 [Noxxie]: I get sent straight to "veiw your mail" O_o lol

2005-12-18 [Allen Barrec]: Haha, oh. Well then... >.>

2005-12-21 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: so, when are you guys going to post a new poem?

2005-12-21 [Kaze]: "Whenever they feel like doing it, GOSH ! "

2005-12-21 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: kaze, that question wasn't directed at you, you know. i was asking allen...politely. curiousity killed the cat.

2005-12-21 [Kaze]: ...that was a joke, there.

2005-12-21 [Allen Barrec]: lol, anytime now...

2005-12-21 [Kaze]: Wow.... I am really, really lost now. I suppose that's average, though.

2005-12-21 [deathly ~*~ beautiful]: dont feel bad im confused too...lol..

2005-12-22 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: *sighs*, why is it that so many people become confused around me of all people?

2005-12-22 [Allen Barrec]: lol, I think it was just a simple typo? ^_^

2005-12-22 [Kaze]: Possibly, but around me, things get needlessly complicated. 'Cause that's the kind of guy I am this week. :3

2005-12-22 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: i believe that we have all noticed......

2005-12-22 [Kaze]: You'll never be my real dad.

2005-12-22 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: not that i would want to anyways....shoo kaze, you bother me....a lot

2005-12-22 [Kaze]: Why is this..? because we are both posting off topic responses to a wiki we have no real control over?

2005-12-22 [Kaze]: Or because you'll never be my real dad?

2005-12-22 [Allen Barrec]: Wow, that's really messed up.

2005-12-23 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: not that i would want to be your dad, although i'm sure that you would like that....but rather because you're annoying

2005-12-23 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: and i am completely used to being totally off topic, and i can still hold up my end of the argument very well. i know it is allen....it truely is. as for posting to a wiki that we have no control over...allen can delete our messages any time he chooses to.

2005-12-23 [Allen Barrec]: *evil glare* Mwahahaha...

2005-12-23 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: yes allen , i know...don't abuse this power though.....

2005-12-26 [Kaze]: I like being me. =D

2005-12-26 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: that's nice to know kaze....i think that you are the only one who would enjoy that....

2005-12-26 [Kaze]: You just like picking fights and being mean. :p What you need is a six foot candy cane.

2005-12-27 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: no, i would rather have a six foot pixy stick! i'm an ass, i know it..and i dealt with it...you should try too.

2005-12-27 [Allen Barrec]: There's the good Christmas spirit...

2005-12-27 [Kaze]: O.O ...now I want a pixie stix that big.. I shouldn'ta shelled out so much money on a candy cane taller than me v__v

2005-12-28 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: lol..well, now you have to do something with it.....i can think of something....

2005-12-28 [Kaze]: If you're referring to horizontal rectal insertion, it just won't fit, face it.

2005-12-28 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: oh, it will work

2005-12-28 [Kaze]: You say that with such homosexual determination, how could I possibly resist you?!

2005-12-29 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: lol...even if i was gay...it would definately NOT be with YOU!

2005-12-29 [Allen Barrec]: Isn't there a place for you two to continue on other than Poetry submissions page? :/

2005-12-29 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: very well, i was getting tired of it anyways...you can wipe it if you wish...though i am sure that it amused you

2005-12-29 [Allen Barrec]: lol, oh yes. It did indeed ^_~

2006-01-02 [underneath the stars]: yesh!

2006-01-12 [~Cerys~Cymraeg~]: wooo :) finally finished it

2006-01-12 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: of course

2006-01-12 [~Cerys~Cymraeg~]: ^_^

2006-01-13 [Allen Barrec]: Fix your format, [~Cerys~Cymraeg~]. And if you didn't realize it was incorrect, read the rules.

2006-01-13 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: i'll make sure she does.

2006-01-13 [dragonus]: I summited a poem.

2006-01-13 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: allen, i already told him, so you do not need to worry that his format was incorrect.

2006-01-13 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: hey allen, i am putting up submission page 6 because this one is starting to get long.

2006-01-13 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: hehehe, Elfpack Daily Poems Submission 6 is up and running. i am sure that you will not be upset with how it turned out.

2006-01-13 [Allen Barrec]: .... Did you get assigned to the EP Daily Poem Bosses and I just didn't hear about it?

2006-01-13 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: *laughs* no, just noticed and took aniciative, that's all...and i was bored. ^,^

2006-01-13 [deathly ~*~ beautiful]: *laughs* i think he just wishes..*cough cough* maybe he just wants to prove he can do the job and get it...*clears throat*

2006-01-14 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: no, just utterly bored and needed something to do

2006-01-15 [deathly ~*~ beautiful]: lol...well you could join a forum and read through all the million posts lmao...i did that once..

2006-01-21 [Allen Barrec]: [dragonus], only one poem per month. Take one off or they both go off. And read the rules.

2006-01-21 [tazz]: im [dragonus] brother and i was wouneering if i could fix it for him

2006-01-21 [Allen Barrec]: Eh, yeah, I suppose that'd be fine ^_^ Just put it in the right format please!

2006-01-22 [tazz]: thank you

2006-01-30 [Starry Skies]: YAY FOR POETRY!!! .... There's one thing bad about poetry though... -_- I'm only good at writing it while I'm in a bad mood lolz ^_^

2006-01-31 [Soft as Bone]: if you try to write when you;rte in a good mood, it may start to come naturally (but your bad mood poetry will always be better-because you;ve been doing it longer)

2006-01-31 [Allen Barrec]: [Starry Skies]– ONE POEM A MONTH. Please take all but one off, or they all go. And check your formating. And read the rules.

2006-02-01 [Starry Skies]: oh sorry kk

2006-02-01 [Starry Skies]: hey wait a minute... I thought elfpack was the liberal form of elftown? o_0 I don't get it... but ok

2006-02-01 [Allen Barrec]: Well, you can try sorting through the thousands of poems that would get submitted if there wasn't *some* limit ^_^ lol

2006-02-01 [Starry Skies]: =p elftown allows 4 poems... but I dunno I really don't like elftown as much as elfpack so I 'spose it's worth it lolz

2006-02-01 [Kaze]: Then start your OWN poetry submission. :p I kid, I kid. n__n

2006-02-02 [Allen Barrec]: Elftown DP probably has a bigger staff, I don't know, I haven't been there in ages. Plus, I had the impression they just shove stuff on at random? Or I may be mistaken. If I am, I apologize.

2006-02-04 [Starry Skies]: haha you're prolly right ^_^ and Maybe I SHOULD start my own poetry submission... lol

2006-02-04 [Starry Skies]: o_0 no one has submitted after mine?!

2006-02-04 [eyes of frost]: If I had another one I would submit but I think we are only allowed 2 submissions...-goes to re-read the rules again-

2006-02-07 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: i would submit a poem, but the list is already sooo long (hint, hint)

2006-02-07 [eyes of frost]: Lol.

2006-02-07 [Kaze]: *eye-roll-O-doom*

2006-02-07 [eyes of frost]: -pokes Kaze-

2006-02-08 [Kaze]: #__0

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